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Author Topic: Bethorm Pre-Release Feedback
gmonk
Nakomé (Clanless)
Posts: 20
Post Re: Bethorm Pre-Release Feedback
on: October 4, 2014, 10:09

We appear to have covered the text at least once. Shall we continue to proof this version or wait for another draft?
luther
Dlántü (Clan-Head)
Posts: 133
Post Re: Bethorm Pre-Release Feedback
on: October 4, 2014, 11:06

I did not know you had so liberally quoted Dr. Barker. Thank you for that clarification. I understand why the text won't be changed in those cases, though I wish someone had been able to convince him to do so. 😉

luther
Dlántü (Clan-Head)
Posts: 133
Post Re: Bethorm Pre-Release Feedback
on: October 4, 2014, 11:19

I will wait for an answer to gmonk's question.

I've been enjoying what I have read. I think you've put a good package together. I look forward to receiving the finished product.
jeffdee
Administrator
Posts: 427
Post Re: Bethorm Pre-Release Feedback
on: October 4, 2014, 12:22

p.123 (126A. Contagious Fungus) "and they dies within 2 minutes"

Fixed.

p.122 (124B. Princely Weapon II) "As above, but the weapon will penetrate the Warding spell (no. 24)." -> the A variant also states that it can penetrate the Warding Spell.

Fixed.

p.121 (121. The Replication of Heroes) -> How are the hit points of the targets regained after the spell ends?

Fixed.

We appear to have covered the text at least once. Shall we continue to proof this version or wait for another draft?

There won't be another round of proofing after this. The Tekumel Foundation is scheduled to send me their final feedback tonight, and once I've incorporated that a final version of the PDF will go out and the book will go to press. It's already late as it is.

Thanks so much for all your extremely helpful feedback, folks!

-Jeff
luther
Dlántü (Clan-Head)
Posts: 133
Post Re: Bethorm Pre-Release Feedback
on: October 4, 2014, 14:31

You are very welcome!
gmonk
Nakomé (Clanless)
Posts: 20
Post Re: Bethorm Pre-Release Feedback
on: October 4, 2014, 16:13

You're welcome, Jeff. Looking forward to the printed book!
NiallGordo-
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Nurtsáhlu (Clan-Brother)
Posts: 33
Post Re: Bethorm Pre-Release Feedback
on: October 5, 2014, 15:55

Having just skim read this thread and I must say that this game ought to have fewer typos than most and some people, particularly Luther, should get a proof reading credit in the final book.
jeffdee
Administrator
Posts: 427
Post Re: Bethorm Pre-Release Feedback
on: October 5, 2014, 19:45

luther and gmonk are both getting proofreading credits in the book.

-Jeff
gmonk
Nakomé (Clanless)
Posts: 20
Post Re: Bethorm Pre-Release Feedback
on: October 5, 2014, 21:25

Thanks, Jeff! I'd prefer my real name (from my profile) vs. my handle, please, if that's okay with you. 🙂
jeffdee
Administrator
Posts: 427
Post Re: Bethorm Pre-Release Feedback
on: October 6, 2014, 01:39

That's the plan 🙂

-Jeff
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