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luther
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Post Re: Bethorm Pre-Release Feedback
on: October 1, 2014, 20:49

P 97, Phatasms II, III, and IV

The Defenses lines in those three stat blocks are indented. Is this intentional?

luther
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Post Re: Bethorm Pre-Release Feedback
on: October 1, 2014, 20:52

P 98, 60A. Slow (Psychic)
Cost: 18; NRG: 12; aimed; attack; 15”range; 1”area; resist; duration: 3 minutes
This spell slows the target(s) perception of time for 3 minutes.

I suggest, "This spell slows the perception of time for the target(s) for 3 minutes."

As currently written, I want to add an "'s" to the end of "target(s)", but that gets very clumsy. My rewording makes my brain stop wanting to work the the possessive form of that phrase out.
luther
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Post Re: Bethorm Pre-Release Feedback
on: October 1, 2014, 20:57

P 98, 61A. Flare (Ritual)
Cost: 10; NRG: 9; aimed; attack; 15”range; 1”area; resist
A visible, hissing blast of energy, scarlet in the case of Karakán, and orange - red when cast by a mage devoted to Vimúhla.

I suggest, "This produces a visible, hissing blast of energy. It is scarlet..."
luther
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Post Re: Bethorm Pre-Release Feedback
on: October 1, 2014, 21:07

P 99, 66A. Reflect Magic (Ritual)
Cost: 20; NRG: 13; self only; prep: 3 rounds; touch; 1 target; duration: 2 minutes
This creates an invisible shield around the caster. If he/she makes a Resistance Check against opponent's "aimed, attack" spells while this spell is in force,

...against an opponent's...

luther
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Post Re: Bethorm Pre-Release Feedback
on: October 1, 2014, 21:31

P 102, 74A. Demonology I (Ritual)
Cost: 23; NRG: 30; self only; prep: 1 minute; 1”rng; 1”area; duration: 2 minutes
luther
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Post Re: Bethorm Pre-Release Feedback
on: October 1, 2014, 21:53

P 104, Azure Denizen (19)
PHYS: 13 DEFT: 12 INTL: 12
WILL: 10 PSYC: 11 Size Mod: -1
Initiative: 1/2/3 Movement: 8 ground
Defenses: Melee: 3 Missile: 3 Magic: 7
Armor: 3/2 Hits: 28 Energy: 110
Attacks Hit: Dmg: Other:
Grapple 15- Secretion 1” diameter area attack
Secretion - 6/9/12 physical armor applies
Sorcery 18-

[The formatting is not transitioning from the pdf. Sorry. Secretion doesn't have a number associated with its "-" in the Hit column.]
luther
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Post Re: Bethorm Pre-Release Feedback
on: October 1, 2014, 22:01

P 104, Demon of the Dark (18.9)
Phobia: Fire. Make a WILL check, unmodified only for campfire - sized blazes.

Are they modified for blazes that are smaller or larger than campfire-sized blazes? As written, it seems incomplete. I may have just not yet read the correct explanatory bit of the rules.
luther
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Post Re: Bethorm Pre-Release Feedback
on: October 2, 2014, 06:48

P 106, Flame Dragon (17.7)
PHYS: 13 DEFT: 12 INTL: 11
WILL: 11 PSYC: 11 Size Mod: -2
Initiative: 2/3/4 Movement: 8 ground, 16 flying
Defenses: Melee: 2 Missile: 2 Magic: 7
Armor: 4/3 Hits: 28 Energy: 110
Attacks Hit: Dmg: Other:
Flame Breath 13- 6/9/12
e
6” range, Flaming*
Pike 13- 6/8/10
Bastard Sword 14-

[Again with the lost formatting.] Does the "e" under the Dmg range belong there?
luther
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Post Re: Bethorm Pre-Release Feedback
on: October 2, 2014, 06:52

P 106, 74B. Demonology II (Ritual)
Cost: 26; NRG: 34; self only; prep: 5 minutes; 2”rng; 3”area;
duration: 3 minutes
luther
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Post Re: Bethorm Pre-Release Feedback
on: October 2, 2014, 06:53

P 107, 74C. Demonology III (Ritual)
Cost: 30; NRG: 36; self only; prep: 10 minutes; 3”rng; 3”area;
duration: 5 minutes
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